Take your writing from good to great in 6 steps
โCan anyone be a great writer?โ
Thatโs what Robert Gerrish asked me during this podcast.
And my answer was โyesโ.
But that “yes” does come with a big caveat.
We tend to think great writers are those who are able to sit down at their laptops, crack their knuckles, and thenย punch out perfectly formed, logically ordered, highly articulate thoughts on demand. In short, we think that initial laying down of words is the polished version we see from them in print.
But thatโs not how it goes.
At all.
Every writer, good or great,ย startsย with the same two things:ย an idea, and a dodgy first draft. It’s what comes after this – something calledย ‘the work’ –ย that separates the good from the great.
Soย what do YOU need in order to be a great writer? It’s both simple … and not!
You just need to care soย deeply about the idea you’re trying to spread, you’reย willing to do ‘the work’.
What does ‘the work’ look like?
Glad you asked.ย Here are some writing tips to help you.
As I alluded to above, many of us try to write perfect first drafts because we think that’s what great writers do.ย Most of the time, however,ย we (where we =ย any writer, no matter how awesome) need to get the crappy wordsย out first in order to get to the good ones.ย The best way to do this is via a dodgy first draft. And the best way to write a dodgy first draft is to free-write.
Free-writing involvesย sitting down and simply getting words down on paper. Donโt edit as you go; donโt force the words to take a certain path. Just take the idea you have and let it be the catalyst for words pouring out on to the page. More than likely youโll be surprised at what comes out. This is GREAT because if it’s โsurprisingโ to you, it’ll be interesting to your readers.
(Tip: I often free-write myย dodgyย first draftsย longhand (ie pen on paper!) to stop myself editing as I go.)
This step is simple: identify what your article is about onย a surface level.
When I finished the first draft of this piece youโre reading now, the answer to โwhat am I trying to say here?โ was โhey people, this isย how you edit an article.โ
Hereโs the problem. Relatively few people think:
โGee I wish I knewย how toย edit better.โ
A more common thought is this one:
โI wish I knew how to inspire people to take action.โ
So THATโS what this piece (this one youโre reading) isย reallyย about. Showing you, the reader, how to use words to inspireย people to take action.
Now we know what our article is REALLY about, we can get busy putting a red pen through anything that does not take the reader there.
And trust me, I know just how much this bit hurts!ย Iโve put my red pen through more than 1000 words over the course of writing this particular piece! In fact, my entire first draft (with two very witty anecdotes) got chopped becauseย none of those words took the reader closer to the point of this article.
But the good news is, even if you have to dump your whole first draft, the fact youโve worked out what your article isย reallyย about means the new words will flow more easily.
Once that initialย edit/re-writeย is done, you areย now the proud owner of a super-sweet-second-draft. And it’s tempting at this point to think you’re done.ย Unfortunately not. This fifth step, if youโve allowed time for it (and if your idea is important enough, then why wouldnโt you?) is critical.
Let the piece โsit for a whileโ โ I suggest a day or more once that second draft is complete. This will allow some magic to happen in the next bit of the process.
While you were letting your piece sit, you were alsoย allowing it to marinate in your mind. And it’s likelyย you’ll haveย come up with better ways of saying certain parts of it. Now is the time toย drop those ‘better ways’ into the piece. Your fresh eyes will also pick upย any bits from the second draftย that eitherย donโt need to be there, or would benefit from a tiny bit more fleshing out.
This final step is the place where you get to really refine thingsย and it’s where your piece will go from being โgood enoughโ to being โgreatโ.
I agree. What Iโve described above IS a lot of work. And Iโm not saying you have to do it for every singleย thingย you write.
But if you do, you could find yourself in the same position as Elle Luna.
Elle ‘did the work’ and then watched asย her ideaย was shared five million timesย over the course of two weeks. Herย idea resonated so deeply it became a book and saw Elle invited to speak in some very cool places.
Now your idea might not go viral on quite that scale. But it’s still super-awesome to seeย your words inspiring action and effecting a positive change that wasnโt occurring before.
And it’s thatย chance to effect positive change โ even if it’s ‘only’ in your corner of the world โ that makesย โdoing the workโ infinitely โworth itโ if you ask me.
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